Sneak attack on Jarred Daviinci from TDU

*Jarred Daviinci is backstage warming up for a match and out of nowhere The Deathifyin Unknown comes from behind with a lead pipe and starts beating Jarred repeatedly until Jarred can hardly even move. TDU then puts his foot on Jarred's spine and holds him down and starts whispering into his ear.*

TDU- " I'm tired of hearing you brag. I'm tired of hearing people chanting your name. You think your good because you have 7 men teaming up on a guy who's all by himself? I just took you out on my own. Where's your Renegade now?!"

*Jarred tries to get up but TDU kicks him quickly in the gut and he falls back down and coughs and gasps for a breath*

TDU- " You don't know me, but soon you will. Im going to be like a reccuring nightmare. Every corner you turn from now on I will be there haunting you. And at the same time you fear me you will have to wonder when your time has run out because i promise you that time you dreaded is closer than ever."

*TDU sees the camera man who snuck up and started filming the incident so TDU grabs the camera and pulls it close*

TDU-" And for all of you 'RENEGADE' members out there. You think this is it? That this is all I'm going to do!? All of you from this day on better look within the shadows because my darkness is rising to a new high. One by one I will tear you apart. Take you out. And day by day Renegade will slowly fade.

*TDU watches as Jarred tries to squirm his way back up one more time and TDU picks back up the pipe and smashes it over the skull of Jarred as the top of his skull rips open and blood splatters everywhere on the floor. TDU drops the pipe beside his lifeless body and once again talks to Jarred*

TDU- "Jarred... If you can hear me. This isnt an offer. This isnt an agreement. I'm telling you that I want a match. Me and you. One on one. And in this match I am challenging your manhood. It will be a cage match. And if any of your Renegade members tend to interfere I will automatically get the win. Because I truly believe without your little 'wolf pack' you wouldnt last a minute in the ring with anyone! But if you dont accept, and if you cant agree to these terms then you better expect more blood to be shed weekly!

*TDU Laughs*

TDU-"Ill give you a week to think about it. Till then.. I sure hope that head of yours heals. Tata for now!"

*TDU kicks him on the way out *

Camera slowly fades away

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*Gyalin Reece is seen angry, walking the backroom area as he looks for the culprit, the one that attacked one of his Renegade members unawares. This guy did not know who he was messing with, and now, the champion was going to interfere. Someone needed to learn a lesson. Earlier in the night, Gyalin Reece went out to the ring and told the crowd everything that had happened in season 1, everything that they were fooled on. Gyalin Reece was now the main heel in all of wrestling, and he would prove it. He was a fighting man, but he did not get his hands dirty. But he would now. Jarred Daviinci was key to him fooling the rest of the wrestling world last season, and now, he would repay the favor and let Daviinci rest. He found the room he was looking for. On the door were the words, TDG. Gyalin Reece turned the doorknob and opened the door. He looked inside, but there was no one about. It didn't matter. He would get his hands on TDG another way. He walked the halls, still looking for TDG.*

Gyalin Reece: "Where is TDG. Where is he?"

Random wrestler: "I haven't seen him."

Gyalin Reece: "No?"

*Gyalin Reece walked a few paces to an aluminum trash can and picked it up. He walked over to the random wrestler who was no longer looking at Gyalin, and smashed the trash can over the wrestler's head. The wrestler collapsed to the ground. Gyalin Reece continued walking.*

Gyalin Reece: "TDG, where are you? Hey you, have you seen TDG?"

Random security guy: "MY name is JIM, and he is TDU, not TDG. And now, for your information, I have not seen him."

Gyalin Reece: "For my information? Very well Jim."

*Gyalin Reece grabs Jim by the head and throws him face first into the wall. Jim hits the wall with a thud and collapses to the ground, busted open. Reece kicks Jim one good time in the face, then spits on him.*

Gyalin Reece: "For your information, I am the champ. I don't care who the hell this guy is. The bottom line is that he will pay for what he did to one of my men, just like you just paid for running your fat mouth."

*Gyalin Reece spits on Jim again, and continues on, until, looking down another hallway, he spots a new person he had never seen before walking the hall in the opposite direction. Gyalin Reece ran at him.*

Gyalin Reece: "TDU?"

*The guy turns around in answer, and Gyalin Reece, not hesitating, clotheslines him with precision. He picks the guy up and throws him into the wall.*

Gyalin Reece: "You've got some nerve coming into my federation and messing with one of my guys. You have fueled my wrath, and now, you will pay for it."

*Gyalin Reece pulls TDU still groggy, by his hair and steps back a few paces.
Gyalin Reece screams "AYATOLAAAAAAA", then runs at opponent and shoulder blocks him down to the ground.
Reece yells "SUICIIIIDE", walks up to opponent, and stomps foot on opponent's neck, executing LEGENDARY Demonic Delight !!*

Gyalin Reece: "You called out Renegade, you attack a member of Renegade? You now have Renegade."

*Gyalin Reece bends down low and gets into the face of the barely conscious TDU.*

Gyalin Reece: "You need to learn a lesson about the heirarchy around here. You are new. You are at the bottom of the totem pole. And I am at the top. And my Renegade members are with me. This is only the beginning. If you ever attack another member again, I promise you, I will put you out of commission for weeks on end. You will be lucky to ever walk again."

*Gyalin Reece stands up and kicks TDU in the head, then stomps on his face.*

Gyalin Reece: "I will see you in the ring later, nontitle match, of course, but a lesson must be learned, and only I can teach it."

*Gyalin Reece spits on TDU, then, after staring at him for a moment, walks away, whistling.*

(Camera fades out, then fades in to announcer's table)

Granville Viscera: "I have never.........."

Marcus Viafildis: "He is Renegade. You attack Daviinci, and the man himself will come to get his hands dirty. TDU asked for it, and he will get what he asked for."

Granville Viscera: "As they say, be careful what you ask for. But I've never seen this side of Gyalin Reece before."

Marcus Viafildis: "I love this side of him. And it's all thanks to PFM, and that one night of horror. And now, he is one cold SOB. The wrestling world is trembling right now. And they should. The champ has arrived, and everyone better beware."

Granville Viscera: "Folks, Gyalin Reece has left three bodies laid out around the arena, two of which were just bystanders. If this is what Renegade is all about, then I hope that more people stand up to them."

Marcus Viafildis: "You heard Renegade earlier. It's all about domination and victory, by any means necessary. And TDU will be another victim added to their hitlist. Attacking Jarred Daviinci was the worst thing he could have possibly done."

Since when has people needed asking when they are attacked?

Are you having a giraffe? I complained about Renegade attacking willy nilly and interring with my RPs last season and was basically told, tough it's our storyline.

Why would I ask someone that I will attack him, If I attack him in a way that he can fight next show, or the same there is no problem, I don't think that(bad example) Randy orton asks John Cena if he can hit him from behind... Well that's what I think.

Jmk10 wrote:Bade that was because you were to late when they did it PFM already added it to the show and could not change it so you should have told him before he added it to the show but you didn't.

No it wasn't you don't know what you're talking about. Anyway you just contradicted yourself. Because you didn't ask me anyway did you. pfft

Read what PFM said. The way some of you want it around here, there will be no surprises or anything. Someone was attacked. So what!!!!! RP what happens after the fact. If you don't want to be attacked, then do something that makes it hard for you to be attacked. Or just don't be present until your match, or don't enter into a long feud. We are going into real RP here. "Hey JMK, can I attack you next show?"


JMK- "Umm, I don't know Reece. Umm, it may not fit because I was planning on..... (or he answers), "Yeah, sure, just attack me like this and that"........

Are we really RPing an old folks group? USE YOUR IMAGINATIONS!!!!! YOU CANNOT ALWAYS LOOK GOOD. And don't say that is not what you want, because that is clearly what some people want. Hell, I want to always look good, lol, but it doesn't work in the RP if that is the case. I am almost certain that if we did not RP the way things went between myself and PFM in the title tourney, I would not even be champion right now, for he would have probably just eliminated me.

With the attack on Jarred, well, it was a bit hard, maybe some words should be changed, because based on the descriptive nature of the attack, Jarred should be out of commission for a while. And 'TDU' my attack on you was not to put you out, just to send a message. You would still be able to fight quite well in your match later in the night, sooooo, The Valencia hospital scene, though very good, was unnecessary. Anyway, come on people, we need our creative juices flowing. And, BTW, everyone don't need to understand everything that is going on. You try to do that, then you will just be lost because we tend to see things in our own point of view instead of through wrestling's point of view, and that is irrational thought. And, also, just so everyone knows, the more someone complains, the less likely others will want to get into a significant RP with them, which would mean that the character will just stall. Everything is going well via storylines. Keep it up, and keep the unexpected coming. PFM signed us all for a reason.

And by the way, Brooklyn Basher and I had a match before the PPV. In that match, he and I were both attacked and knocked out cold, but I got the win, because one of my guys, (who the general public at the time did not know was my guy. and it was done to keep me face until after the PPV), knocked us both us, but placed me on top of Brooklyn for the win. Now, Brooklyn said nothing to me or anyone else about that. Instead, he roleplayed next week about the attack and other attacks that were going on to the GM, and from the point of view that I did not know about the attack taking place either. But anyway, because of this, and because of the revelation I will give on season 2 that I had planned the attack for me to win all along, we will go into a feud where eventually, he gets the better of me. But I want to work with Brooklyn because he was an RPer, and he RPed, nothing more. And it would be a good storyline. Now if his RPs are terrible, he probably don't get the better of me, but, I don't think they will be bad. But I want to work with Brooklyn. Oh, and Brooklyn had no idea he was going to be attacked in our match. But he RPed the next week anyway about the attack, why? Because that is the way it is in wrestling from the viewers standpoint.

thanks gyalin

lol i hav just seen these later comments now

but yeah i mean we screwed BB outta the match last season but he got on with it like we all shud be doin now